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August 4, 2008

The foreseen part-2

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"Whats your name buddy?", I heard an older voice outside the room.
"Steve Mack", this came from a gentleman who voiced young.
"Where are you taking me too",the old voice uttered.
"To the fifth floor sir",the reply was polite from the gentleman.
Now I can see both of them passing by, there was a old man seated on a wheel chair and he was pushed through by a stout handsome young man.
The old man in the wheel chair and Steve got into the lift, the lift doors close; above the door, on the wall, I can read the number in blue colour, it says "10".
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My eyes were half opened, I was shivering, mom was sitting near me.
"George how are you feeling now", mom asked.
"Could you switch off the fan please..", my voice wasn't in its full swing, I knew fever had again struck me.Mom switched off the fan.
"Now sleep on son,sleep well",Mom started caressing my hair. I was getting back to sleep, I curled in my blanket...

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"I really don't understand what's going on", I was talking to someone.
Suddenly the warning bells goes off and the announcement comes out,
"Emergency announcement, Lift number 10 has halted due to technical failure in between 8th and 7th floor, all lifts have been halted till further announcements".
I looked at him,"I told you".
"

"huh............"
"Are you feeling okay now", a doctor asked me,he was the same guy who had attended my father's case.
"Yup, am fine now,hows my dad", I asked him.
"He is doing great now, he is in the other room, you can take him home tomorrow, anyways, before leaving, make sure you meet me", Doctor told me.
"sure", I replied.

"Whats your name buddy?", I heard an older voice outside the room.
I was stunned. I told doctor to move aside.
"Where are you taking me too",the old voice uttered.
"To the fifth floor sir",the reply assured me what was going to happen next.
Now I can see both of them passing by, there was a old man seated on a wheel chair and he was pushed through by a stout handsome young man.
"Doctor stop them, they are going to be in big trouble", I shouted.
"What ,why?",Doctor was perplexed.
"I have foreseen this, I have seen this in my dream, their lift is going to be in trouble"
"In your dream, what is that... hope you are ok",doctor couldn't understand me
I jumped off my bed, ran out of the room, they were just about to get in the lift.
I ran to them,"Hey wait please..."
"yes sir", the attender looked at me with a pleasant face, the old man in the wheel chair seemed to be surprised.I looked at the id of the attendant.
"Mike,.. Mike Sauzen .. ,well is it your real name?", That wasn't the name I was looking for.
The attendant smiled,"May I go now sir".
"Yes please, sorry for the trouble", I apologized.They went into the lift,the lift doors closed; above the door, on the wall, I can read the number in blue colour, it says "10".
I was again shocked, "what's happening,everything else was the same, but his name should have been Steve".
The doctor came running to me and asked,"What's wrong with you?".It was more an embarrassment for me, people around me seemed to be disgusted with my behaviour
The doctor was staring hard at me, I looked all around, people were staring at me, I looked at the doctor and asked,"What's wrong with me?".
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3 comments:

Aslam's World said...

COMMON MAN....COME OUT WITH YOUR NEXT PART SOON.
ITS LIKE AM WATCHING DAILY SOAP IN T.V WITH AN EXITING END TEMPTING ME TO COME AGAIN TO READ WHATS GONNA HAPPEN NEXT

Shantharam Shenoy K said...

hey...this is going gr8..aslu said rite...something like a daily soap cant wait till the next one...do hurry dude...

Arun said...

Looks well suited for the a new tv show Final Destination.

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